GRE创作中学生总会遭受的一个难题便是写败的文章内容不足正宗,让评委一眼就能看得出本文并不是NATIVE SPEAKER写的,而大家的作文评分也会因而遭受安害。而实际上这类不地道的难题许多 情况下都是以用词上反映出往的。下边网编就根据实例比照解读GRE创作用词的恰当错误方式,一起来看。

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GRE创作用词的挑选

创作中用词不精确是非常容易犯的问题,good,terrible,see,nice,kind,greatly,think,know,something等词汇在学生优秀作文中不断出現。这种词自身并没有问题,是英语常用词,可是他们表达的含意过度模糊不清,许多 状况下,应当应用实际意义更为精确的词。更何况,一直应用这好多个词会给人一种表达方式简单,词汇量匮乏,文章内容欠缺感召力的印像。下边的一些事例,根据换用一、2个精确生动的词语或者应用一些固定搭配及习语就使全部语句提色许多 。

词汇应用实例1

Original: Solving trivial problems in the dorm will add your social experience and help you to understand other people’s feelings and learn to be kind。

Revised: Solving trivial problems in the dorm will enrich your social experience and help you to understand other people’s feelings and learn to be considerate。

评析

add,kind表达的含意都较为广泛。add能够 指总数上的提升,还可以指水平的提升,针对“丰富多彩工作经验、提升专业知识”这个意思,用enrich会使表达更精确。kind从字面上实际意义上讲是“好的、善解人意的”,用kind来形容一个人没法实际地主要表现出一个人的性格特点究竟如何,原话中是想表达“考虑周全、关怀备至”的特性,要精确表达这一含意应挑选considerate。

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词汇应用实例2

Original: Science and technology have greatly influenced our lives and our society is changing very rapidly。

Revised: Science and technology have come to pervade every aspect of our lives and, as a result, society is changing at a speed which is quite unprecedented。

评析

greatly,rapidly回属于常用词,表达水平高、速度更快,那样的词在表达实际效果上不足实际,欠缺感染力,在改动后的语句选用了pervade every aspect of our lives就实际栩栩如生地主要表现出高新科技的知名度究竟有多大,其知名度已渗进人们生活的各个方面,at a speed which is quite unprecedented意指“以一种史无前例的速率”,品牌形象正宗出了转变速率之快。

词汇应用实例3

Original: Young people tend to think that real life is as nice and interesting as it is in the novels and movies, while more experienced adults think this kind of naive daydream will only be destroyed by later experiences and every one should learn to get used to common everyday life。

Revised: Young people tend to think that real life is as dramatic and fascinating as it is in the novels and movies, while more experienced adults think this kind of naive daydream will only be destroyed by later experiences and every one should learn to get used to tedious everyday life。

评析

nice,interesting,common都回属于一般词汇,采用语句中也看起来平平淡淡惨白。nice的意思是“好的,让人开心的”,interesting是“趣味的”,这两个词用不可以精确地勾画出年青人所期待的幸福生活,句中想表达的是年青人觉得生活好似小说集、影片一般填满戏剧表演转变,振奋人心,要反映这层含意应当用dramatic,fascinating。dramatic表达“刺激性的,戏剧化的,给人深有感触的”,fascinating表达“具备暗显诱惑力的,美丽动人的,让人如痴如醉的”,这两个词的水平要比nice,interesting深得多,感染力也更强。原话用common表达具体的实际生活的枯燥乏味不是精确的,common的意思是“一般的,平时的”,一般平时的物品不一定是枯燥乏味的,tedious是表达“(因太长、太慢或简单)令人厌倦的,讨厌的”,正好传递出实际生活因为零碎和反复而越来越乏味这类含意。

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词汇应用实例4

Original: We all know that most factories would be of no use if there were not clean water supply。

Revised: It goes without saying that most factories would be of no use if there were not clean water supply。

评析

跟上面一样例一样,know那样的初中级词汇应防止在优秀作文中应用,It goes without saying that…是一个固定不动构造,意思是“……是显而易见的”,常常在优秀作文中用于旁征博引或说暗一个妇孺皆知的大道理,相近的表达也有:

An old saying goes that…

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